Friday, 8 June 2018

Klarysa's Profile

My name is Klarysa  and I go to Makauri School. I Live in Gisborne. I have one sister.
My favourite subject is writing. I like writing because you can write stories and Free write. My goals are improving my punctuation in writing.
This year I'm looking forward to achieving my goals like improving my punctuation.

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4 comments:

  1. Bethan22 June 2018 at 09:41

    I love it but you could put some more writting.

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  2. Hannah O'Connor22 June 2018 at 09:48

    Hello Klarysa. Have you had a good day so far?
    I love that you have not talked about your private information, I love your goals they are really good, you have got a good goal for this year, I hope you achieve it by the end of the year. I also love how you have put in your favourite subject. But for one pointer you could wright a bit more e.g your strengths and goals for writing, what subject you don't like and what sport you love playing, but anyway I love it.

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  3. Anonymous22 June 2018 at 09:57

    thanks for the feedback hannah

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  4. Anonymous22 June 2018 at 09:57

    thanks for the feeback bethan to

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